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sumthng i tried for the 1st time..


k i was jus gettin bored so thot of tryin to make a poem ...so i came wit dis ...ok 1st itself i m tellin dis isnt my peom totally i hav used sum phrase here n derr..so no criticizin...
so here i go ..

"AS U & I ARE NOT MEANT TO BE 4EVER"

I hate looking myself in the mirror,
as there is nothng to see, nthng but my own mistakes starrin bak at me..
I hate knowing I have fear.
as i have a fear tht u n i hav different paths to take
I hate the feeling that I am scared.
as u ll go away frm me one day,
I hate believing what isn't true,
as u hav maketh my moments memorable
I hate believing and trusting you.
as i knw tht in de end u n i r not meant to b 4ever
I hate crying myself to sleep,
Forgive me for I have dreams.
as i dream of luv as time passes through my hands..
i envy u ..
i envy u
i envy u..
Other men have seen angels, But I have seen thee, And thou art enough
but such a thng is not meant to last..
pls 4giv me 4 wat i hav done wit u..
as u n i r not meant to b 4ever.....

k i knw it aint in tht rythmic manner also ..but still did u guys lyk it...i knw sum stuff in dis poem is frm here n derr..but trust me ..even i added sum stuff...n my stuf is more than waat is pasted frm other sources..




-- Edited by MackD at 14:31, 2006-06-27

-- Edited by MackD at 22:08, 2006-08-28

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hey umran,


nicee poem there! honestly you could make that into a song or something like tht ehehe (make sure u copyright tht piece of work..or sum singer or someone might steal it hehe)



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Woww


Dat poem is so nice!!! it really is!! i luv it!! GO u!!



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hey umran,


i never knew there is such a brilliant poet within taht shy Umran face. its absolutely remarkable. the best ability of a poet is to express his feelings in lesss words and to get the most out of it. I think u hav given a really gud shot. want u to write more. and remmber we are there with u, and we luv stuff like this.


Varun



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try out my new site...


http://devoted.to/mackd


its stil goin under sum updates  but pretty gud enuf to start wit


 



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Nice site dude......Put d pics n all

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check out sum of the kewlest n hottest music videos over my site..
here is a short cut to it..
http://mackd.multiservers.com/mus/musiclink.html

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ur site is really nice


can u add sum more music videos of BEP?



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y not....let my exams get over ...den i ll def add..n put a link to download dem too ...is tht fine?

-- Edited by MackD at 12:41, 2006-09-02

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thx........

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