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My first try at this !!!


Well guys ...... i have been tryna write stories or poems frm days bt unfortunately neva was able to make a nice one ....... which could be presented to the world ..... but somehow one pleasant night i made 2 together ..... the one b'low is the first one.....


to the one for whom my heart beats !!!!!


Mystery of those eyes


 


I wondered and wondered in all my life :


What is the charm that lies in the eyes ?


Why they are considered the way to one's heart ?


Why their depth resembles the skies ?


Why they hold so much attraction ?


Why thier beauty never dies ?


And at last i got my desire,


and concluded - they never reflect lies.


Honest and innonence is what they hold,


and make the heart grow fonder.


pain is what they perish,


and love is what they cherish.


 


Guys i kno its short but thats short but then its jus the first one ..... hope you all like it .....



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hey sagar...tat was really nice......keep it up man !

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dude u were hot maan... see the i hav told tis b4 the beauty of any sort of poetry is explaining the most u can in less words.. u gav it a gud shot... ****inue writing.. probably that will make u better gradually... we are always there with u dude.... U DEFINITELY LUV THOSE EYES!!!


Varun



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mAKE more poems stories Dude BECUM a poet

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my ratin ..well...............................2 thumbs up dude!......keep up de good work.........

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