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Poem 4 poo!!


Oh my God hus dat??
Man!! Shes fat!!
Oh my!! She's hairless!! She's wearing a wig!!
Man!! Wat a dumb pig??


And on they whispered abt her
but did she care??
on the surface no, bt deep inside, yea
All she thought; 'Life is unfair'


"But are THEY cancer survivors??
Did THEIR life knock on deaths doorstep?
I wonder how'd they feel
if their life was stomped upon under the devils heel??"


'Cuz on dat fateful new years eve
did the news she come to grieve
topple her confidence n crush her dreamz
& made her feel just dat, 'My dreamz will always stay dreamz.'


But thats not where this poem ends
nt with her crushed dreams, but continues
'cuz from this rubbble rose
new dreams, new hopes, & a new outlook of life.


She's smart & clever
& sorta pretty, in an abstract way
she's cute and funny
she can brighten me up anyday.


She's got the brightest eyes
with the loveliest baby soft curls in her hair
she's slim & svelte
her n me? u'll neva find a better pair.


Gurl,


Ur crazy allrite thats true
bt i luv evry dumb thing u do
so now I say to u
I love u POO!!



-- Edited by deadlydivs at 09:34, 2006-09-08

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Hey guyz


Dis is my third serious attempt at poetry (its sooo no rhymin) bt this poem, 'poem for poo' is dedicated 2 my bestest frend hus always dere for me n vice versa n will always lend me her shoulder. All that i have written is true n only goes 2 show hw we discriminate among ourselves wen sum1 hu needs our help turnz 2 us. N wat do we do?? we shun em aside.


Friends r very precious. cuz among dese teen years dey r d only ones hu most of us can confide in. treasure ur frndz n luv your enemies 2.


Temme wat u think abt d poem??



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Keep it up divya..

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in the begginin i thght it wus abt ragging...btu then da cancer stuff came up...wateva..sum neat stuff dare divz..slpendid

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tat was really nice.....seriously


keep it up divz !!



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thnx guyz!!! glad u liked it. i felt it was one of my better efforts so far......bt den nt 2 beat ameen.........

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well..wat abt beating me??..i didnt kno we were havin a competition here..are we???

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that was ur best attempt yet, gal!keep rockin'!!


though poo mite not necessarily like the abstract pretty part it is such a sweet poem.n oh don let her hear u say poo!<wink>



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lol yea


thnx lidi-babes


yea she still gives me dat abstract look of herz.............its a killer.


 



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gr8 work ..... divz keep tht goin ..... dunno hw i missd seein it ??

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