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path of light---when u loose all ur hopes


ohh...as i told i lyk writin poems this onez for those who feel lonely n who luv loneliness....


 







Path Of Light

Beyond me lies the empty space,
No trace of light I can see.
For I am trapped in this lonely place,
No sign of my destiny!

All alone I lie in this trap,
Or is someone else with me?
A place which doesn't exist on the map!
Who here would like to be.

The only wrong I ever did,
Has left me alone sorrounded by sea.
I have seen this darkness since I was a kid,
I wish it wasn't me.

Suddenly, I see a path of light,
Which long ago as a kid, I should have seen.
At last I have it in my sight,
But no sign of my destiny!


Adnan Bashir Bhat


Copyright ©2006 Adnan Bashir Bhat



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Adnan back!! well dat was diff. bt nice.actually ive never seen a NOT nice peoem bt wateva.............LOVELY!!!!!!

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hey Adnan....tat was really nice.....keep it up

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tnx nice of u guyz .......

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yea dude ws gr8 ..... gr8 variety frm u ..... keep it goin

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