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ok herz a lovable theme which i like a love poem


Lovable Theme


 


Shocked was I when I saw her for the first time,


She didn’t mind looking at me back even once


My mind went into different thoughts, had I committed crime,


I had felt in love, her every attractive look stuns.


 


Never had I seen such a beauty before,


Seems like never would I see such again in my entire life


Her image remained in my heart, deep within its core,


Every stunning look of hers was even sharper than a knife.


 


Any reason to talk to her would do,


I just wanted to hear her sweet voice


Time was passing by, as would a Loo,


I thought she stayed there for me, to add up to my rejoice.


 


My heart pounding as fast as could,


Her short and blonde hair made me crazy


My feet began pushing them towards her, as would,


But I looking at her, like someone really lazy.


 


I went up to her and she stared back,


Cold sweat drenched me, was all over my face


Her heart was the thing my heart wanted to hack,


It just felt to open its case.


 


Slowly and slowly we became great friends,


I realized that even she loved, as much as I


Together we went out, did all kinds of trends,


All the time we were together, time just seemed to fly.


 


We loved each other so much, that we couldn’t go the other ways,


But life continues on like a maze


With all the difficulties which we have to face,


I had lost her, just lost everything I hit


But she still remains in my heart, deep within it.



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man......i told u. i love ur poemz..where do u get it from!?!??!?!?!?! the ideas i mean!!!!!!!!!

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yea tnx dere....the secret is ma head lollll

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yea dude .... seriously ur gr8 n actually one of the best out here ..... which class r u in dude ?? jus keep it goin

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me im in 10d......


 


loaza fun



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hey u r in hindi section ???? i dunno y it din look like

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y it din look lyk??????cant understand dat sagar....don u believe im in hindi sec......although im in hindi sec i still enjoy wrirtin english poems lol.....

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duh!! dude nt tht way ........ u can write eng poems for sure .... it jus din feel like u wer in hindi section ..... no hard feelings dude.... i din think anytin bad abt u



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u takin me wrong..nt agaisnt u on dat issue...take it easy..

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yea yea dude.... i m calm

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