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Story of my life.......


erm...heres da stupid poem i was talking abt...hope u guys dont lyk it


4 yrz back,


i saw someone,


a friend she lacked,


i met her once


n thot she was weird


but soon, was proved wrong.


I dint talk to her much,


Dint know her that much


But then I thank that teacher,


Hu tol me to sit next to her.


I was shy at first n so was she


But slowly n slowly,


Our friendship increased


From 6th to 7th we went


N thot that year would never end.


With both our crushes n lovers there,


Both of us were in a terrible nightmare


Somehow the time passed by,


N we finally bid 7th goodbye.


To 8th we finally went,


Was happy n neva wanted to complain.


That year though everything had changed


Life fr me was never the same.


All my frenz specially her,


Were never so close to my heart.


With all the outings n trips we went to


My life had turned very colourful


We thnkd our tchrs fr teachin,


N came to 9th laughing n jumping


Thgh I was xtra-happy that day,


All my sadness/fear jus ran away


Both of us were together agn,


Thght u did sum blackmailin


Coz I remember v always blabbered lyk hell


Ask my tchrs they will tell!


Into class I came all happy n smiling


Thgh as soon as I came by head strtd screamin


'my class is so damn boring!'


Thgh later I wndrd


Wat exactly gav me that thot


She n me made a good pair,


Wasn’t long since all the tchrs knew we were best pals dare.


9th was loads of surprises


Dare was an excited chill in me with every sunrise.


Den one day smthn dreadful happnd,


My 'love-life' as it seems had never happened


A few dayz l8r smthn exciting happnd,


I was in a secret I wasn’t gna tell


He trusted me I guess


N ikept his turst no idea how


Thgh later on I spilt da beans,


Everything was fine by all means.


Then I wondered whether I was missing something,


Came like a blast it was lonliness in me.


I missed my 'love-life' a lil too much,


I exposed myself n told her wat was up


She as always made me strong


After that I hate him so


I owe tis totally to u ..lol!


U made my frst trip so much better


Oh gawd u made me miss da old times later,


Da second trip wuz loadz of fun too,


Jus kiddin but had to tease u!


10th came with loads of scares n fears


Oh damn its da board year.


This yr too wasn’t less dan da last,


Full of surprises-no wonder its goin so fast.


Seemed jus yesterday v gav u dat scare,


12 mrch wuz scary nywayz.


N den u went n came


N nthn was ever the same.


ur ex asked me y u did this


N I thot the full world is a bitch


Was surprised myself


But wat da heck, its ur life isn’t it?


Now nthn is the same


Summer vacs are to blame


Is our friendship too gone?


Coz widout u ol' pal,


My darkness has just begun.


 



-- Edited by khush_cool at 20:58, 2006-10-05

-- Edited by khush_cool at 17:17, 2006-10-06

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man really long.....i think longer than mine...and also a gr8 work by u....so just keep up the gud work.....


 


i recommend u keepin all ur poems saved n also not usin the short abbreviations in poems.......everything esle is good....and tryna put two lines togetha to make one line...ill make it even betta.....


 



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hmm.....will try to keep tat stuff in mind next time i write a poem....nw tats gonna be after a long time....coz ive kinda decided to quit tis thng abt poems.....getz me even more depressed sometimes.........nywayz..thnks adnan


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-- Edited by khush_cool at 17:18, 2006-10-06

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hey nice poem khsuh.... jus a lil bit long but its ok..... n seriously i wanna congratulate u for postin poem in poetry coulmn only....

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wel yeah its long......itz da story of my life isnt it....u cnt expect story-poems to be small can u????

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