man really long.....i think longer than mine...and also a gr8 work by u....so just keep up the gud work.....
i recommend u keepin all ur poems saved n also not usin the short abbreviations in poems.......everything esle is good....and tryna put two lines togetha to make one line...ill make it even betta.....
hmm.....will try to keep tat stuff in mind next time i write a poem....nw tats gonna be after a long time....coz ive kinda decided to quit tis thng abt poems.....getz me even more depressed sometimes.........nywayz..thnks adnan