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Old Poem


dis wuz sumthin i had written LLOOOOONNG back..thinkn abt rejections...jus wanted to share it..let me kno wat u think


 


i wasnt in love but it feels like i had my haert broken,


it was only a crush i kept it in i never was open
she told me she liked someone else and my heart just stopped,


so shocked that my jaw just dropped


i had a feelin i wasnt her type, that feelin grew true i guess i was right
thinkin about her like she was my girl,


all happy inside like i have the whole world



then reality hits... i have nothin,


if i had her then maybe i'd have somethin



she makes me smile everytime shes around,


 now it feels that my heart is draggin on the ground



i'd tell her my feelins but i dont know how'd she take it,


 bein crushed over a crush sucks i really hate it


 



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its nice


veir do u get ideas 2 rite poems??????????



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thnks really...ideas?..oh well i dont need ane...i jus think of the situtation im in..and i write them..i hav loads..btu i dont keep dem on da comp

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hey...its good...!!really!!


Never thought you would be the poetic type ....



-- Edited by khush_cool at 17:45, 2006-09-05

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wel it keeps cumin and goin...ok im feelin wierd..im neva comfy gettin comments abt sumthin frm gurls...GUYS HELP!!!



-- Edited by ameen_sep22 at 22:48, 2006-09-05

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yea...coz [duh] tis was written fr a gurl....n it wud be read by a gurl....so only a gurl can tell how it REALLY is....

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u mean no guys hav read dis thing?? whoa dats news to me

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