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Kashmir (God’s Own Paradise)


 


A place where the green essence is smelt,


Where the birds chirp day and night


The presence of someone really special is felt,


In this place at great height.


 


Where the river flows between the mountains,


The trees keep growing on


The valley is decorated, imaginary fountains,


The memory in your mind will never be gone.


 


Where the plants dance in the wild breeze,


They sing the song back to you


A place where you can lie down at ease,


On your back, simply admiring the blue.


 


Snow-capped peaks reflect the sun’s light,


As they melt, they flow down the slope


And keep flowing down till night,


Joining the brimming brook is their last hope.


 


This place feels like home, where you can have a great time,


What you earn is an experience really special and nice


All the time you spend here is chanting a rhyme,


This place is also known as the God’s Own Paradise.



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i jus luv kashmir so this was one way of u know.....like displayin ma feelins fo it....

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yea dude kashmir is seriously paradise on earth......... ive been there once for 2 days n its like heaven..... such beautiful scenery ...

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yea but a paradise turned into livin hell....hope one day itl become wat it waz baq in previous old dayz.....a beauty.!!!

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yea ..... bombs , shootouts wat not man ?? they call it the valley of terror now....

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really luks like its picked up frm a hindi textbuk of our skool and converted into english... lol... jus jokin... but very well written dude.. very nice, keep it up.... dont want o be talkin abt kashmir but all my best wishes

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yea....thxs varun.....welll ok letz avoid talkin bout kashmir..fyn

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kashmir...and ur poem..bot a beauty...but i do kinda find da comment by varun funny..hindi text books...maan what ugly poems do they hav yaar..so kiddish ones

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hindi text books >>>> .... i dunno how they r ??? but i din undrstand one thing .... y r ppl nt talkin abt kashmir here ? its a heven guyzzz

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