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mystic river


Mystic River


 


Beyond this space, between the valley,


Ran down the hill an overflowing river


Whatever it hit, took it in its rally,


To a land no one has been to, and will never.


 


The sound of its flow, a tremendous gush,


Overflowing with its sound was this place


Moving as fast as it could, with a rush


Who could have wondered it had a race?


 


The air slowly turned misty and chilly,


Not one could have wondered was it danger


In this place, peculiar and hilly,


It could be, if you knew nothing and were a stranger.


 


The clouds turned black, the angry nature,


The river turned fierce in this weather


Could any one survive here, any creature?


Or would he be left to sorrow on his left over feather.


 


All you could think of was to somehow get out,


Or be lost in this valley, so to return never


In this land, where nothing would sprout,


The happenings of the ‘MYSTIC RIVER’


 


ok herz where i stp frndz......tnx fo ur cooperation of readin my poemz n even lykin em....i really appreciate u guyz...tnx...



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u mean ur gonna stop posting more poemz?????????????
ohhhhhkk.......thgh i think every1 will miss ur poems.....dey r lyk totally different frm da rest
i mean everybody posts da same lovey-dovey poemz........urz r different

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yea serious .... jus wat khush said .... but i guess its ok .... i mean v can wait for somtin ....

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wait fo sumtime........yea...tnx for ur patience guyz....i mean i will be baq surely....i m developin new poemz n once i get 5 more in ma book ill post them....



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itll get borin if u keep postin a poem everyday u kno.... i mean tk a brk n come up with some really cool ones then.... u gt bord if u see the same actor in a movie again n again every week so tht way the life u hav in ur poem don let it die tk a brk n come bak with sum better n cooler stuff ...tc

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yea i understand.

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hey guyz wanned to know wheter this title suits the poem..helpppp

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i guess it does ........... but y u askin ??

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coz im postin it on a site....lol

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