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a hot one


Well oneday we will speculate :laugh: our love is it
distant,like the clouds that sway back and forth.
Its been awhile to feel the warmth and glow of a
forever love.
Have we gone back to to the age of innocent
notions,or is our heart forever the age it feels.
Ive tried and lived without the touch of tenderness for awhile.
To have me melt inside is a beautiful feeling.
Can it really be or is it in my dreams of dreams.
Your so hard to get to,my arms need to feel again.
But most of all a heart untouched without love,
grows cold and unfeeling.
The sting of a loneliness that sings to us forever.
It makes the heart grow old with fears, and fills me with
tears.
Oneday it will be a gentle breeze,chilling on a beach.
Sun to warm us,Kisses so hot,we will explode with a extascy,
that god has intended.
Dreams of a love that will cover us both into night and lastly
morning will come,with a new fresh day. :D


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uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wat? am sry bt dat went over ma head...........i mean i understood bt.......sry dint like it much. understood d theme bt d way u expressed it..........sumthinz missin. sry. dnt stop writin.

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kno what...even i didnt understand.....its tough to understand poems written by sum1 else

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hey i though tht all the poems u posted here were all written by u ??? i too din understand this one n was abt to ask tht frm whered u gt such gr8 vocablury to write this poemmm

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wel its jus this poem..i thght il push it a bit far...this particular poem i got frm a site called loveactually.com...dares only one poem on the site and dat is dis...came across it and posted it here


da rest of poems are by me of coz...thgh not as gud as adnans


 



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no actually its nt d vocab its d style of writin.its nt graspin. frankly im bored dead of all d oooooh my heart is broken poemz. wid d same draggin style....im cumin up wid sum poems from a diff perspectiev n a really diff topic.

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that'll be cool ..... i too did expect a change by sum1 cz thses wer gettin too many .... adnan did bring abt a nice change thou ...

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thou means You in english...so u mean to say adnan bought a change YOU..wateva..yes he duz wwirte diff poems..dats y i think hes da best arnd here..one if them is really creepy

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duh dude !!! by thou  i meant  THOUGH !!

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kidding yaar

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dint sound thou.... neways 4get it......

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dare u go..thou again!!!

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ehh...lyk....forget it man...!!!!!!

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yea.... forget it...who cares THOU ??

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