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adnan


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SO GUYZ THIS IS THE ONE I KEPT U WAITIN FOR......


 


A Night out


 


 


It was something terrible, I guess,


A Lonely night, all alone, I confess


Doomed in this dark, my misfortune,


Creepy creatures dwindling on their tune.


 


Every time I moved a step closer to that thing,


Strange voices beneath me, would ring


Lost in this shadowy mist was I,


I had every reason to feel scared, as strange shadows passed by.


 


Surely, this was my first experience in this terror,


Faces of the creatures, a thousands in the mirror


Everywhere I looked, strange appearances in my sight,


How scared was I, I was sweating in this chilly night.


 


Then in a moment, everything dissolved near my eyes,


I could see nothing, but the raging of the skies


I thought, was this the end of man kind?


This misty night and the chilled air, just made me blind.


 


As I approached that little familiar cave,


I stood for a moment shocked


Made for me was that grave,


Long ago, in which, forever I was locked.


 


Adnan Bhat- 2006


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SO WHAT U THINK OF THE TITLE......N WHO COULD TELL ME WHAT IS HAPPENIN IN THE POEM...



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aaw !!! i m totally aawed by it.... one of the best on WUISM...... it gave the feeling inside ..... as to wats goin on .... i guess its abt a person nearin his death ..... the things he can feel inside his heart, mind, soul, the restlessness n the end ......... lovely dude.... wat was the othr topic u thot ??

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haha sagar....jsut missed it....keep tryin though....

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welll i liked d poem


bt.....


hmmmm


is it abt a person hus explorin, curioz abt d future n abt death bt also afraid?? like ummmm cuz of our greed b thirst 2 no more????/ nahh...think im lost too........



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ok guyz think shud i tell the answer???no some more chancez......ok guyz...keep tryin...

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lol...is it smthn lyk near a grave or smthn????


not really surprised hw ppl getin lost...da poem has been wonderfully been put in a different n confusing way...amazing



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i gues u cannt make it ppl....nw here...see its about the poet(me), who has been dead yrs baq...n now this nyte his soul gets up and wanders when it finally reaches its grave baq realising it has been dead already yrs baq.....while it wanders it experiences harsh climate n also difficulties....which throw light of how the atmosphere was when he died....now guyz gt tat????



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ooohhhhhhhhhh.......so i wuz KINDa close wasnt i?????


nywyz...nice poem...keeps u wndrn



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yea close there

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hey the poem was nice .... n maybe better wen i kno the meaning .... r u seriously dead yrs back ????

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hey din u know im dead yrs...baq....??seriously dude im surprised u din know im dead already???

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errm...wierd disscussion u seem to be having dare

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hey khush im really dead!!

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yea .....  he is .... cool ..... meet her tomm in skool .... n show khush the proof....hows the feelin wile death ?? n wat happens after tht ??

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wow...life after death....


 


 


thgh sumtimes life killz b4 deth.........



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well said khush ..... but jus imagine wat will there b in store for us after death ??

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peace..???????? happiness.....????????/


gawd only noes...or betta..adnan



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yea better ask the dead man adnan himself .... dude ans the questions....

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BHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


omg


lol


i knew dere was sumthin creepy bt u..........................


so.


hows life?? *lol*


 



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sagar_2good wrote:

yea .....  he is .... cool ..... meet her tomm in skool .... n show khush the proof....hows the feelin wile death ?? n wat happens after tht ??


HAHAHAHAHAHAAH LOL!!!! nice one sagar... prbbly ill invite an english dept. teacher to find out the literary devices 2!!!... and the concept of the whole poem in shudhdh english.... lol!!!


but well nice effort dude... very well thought of... sumthing really adorable...


After readin sagar's post i remmber sumthin in 7th... We learnt this chapter about this versatile gal.. whu was killed by a lion.. and the funniest part went this way... we were given a long answer question which asked... You are Bertha, Describe step by step how u were killed by the lion... hahahahahahahahahahah lol!!!!!!!!!!!! how much i laughed on this,... and even tday wen i remmmber this i die laughin... but i really dont die like adnan huh!!! ...Varun



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haha varun.....i die n again baq....so don think im dead already!!!



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ummm...is it da lesson in whoch she tries to hide but da anmal finds her????


behind da buhes or smthn....ringz  a smaaallll bell...cant figure it out.....


nywayz........lyk i said b4...da poem is put in a very nice way...no1 really thinks of writing poemz on tis topic too.................



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maybe no one likes but i really lovr writin poems on mystery n spiritual world....hmmmm..

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n tat itself shows how different u r frm da oder ppl..............i mean i knw loadz off ppl hu write love poemz....or poemz fr fun...but only 1-2 hu write poemz which make sense or whch have a different theme.....


keep it up



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ohuuu....thxs....

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yea .... hey varun i cant beleev tht ...... hw cud they ask such a ques !!! lord ..... did u ans tht anyways ??

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nw guyz there is one poem which i made today in skooll.....n guez what itz 3 pages


in 3 periods,....



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hah,....i wrote 2 pgs in ONE period......hehe.....so i beat u


thgh ubeat me agn coz ur poemz ALWAYZ make sense...mine dont...i jus scribble wateva cumz in my mind....dnt even think abt it.....


so practically...im back on square one....



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wen u both gonna post them ??? no use writin n savin for ur future..... share those guys........

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nah...im not gonna post mine...really dumb n wateva..doesnt really make any sense...nywayz..

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